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zchizzerz Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 210 W: 59 N: 633] (7021) [2009-09-15 2:02]

i like the inclusion of vegetation to the frame. it gives direction to the main subject. tfs.

jeff

zchizzerz Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 210 W: 59 N: 633] (7021) [2009-03-04 20:43]

x,

amazing wonders that a mod-cam can do. no need for long process of compose-meter-screw-unscrewifmiscalculated! great and surreal scene. tfs.

jeff

zchizzerz Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 210 W: 59 N: 633] (7021) [2009-03-04 20:40]

hi sandy,
well composed, good use of shapes and curves. colors are vibrant and the sharp. tfs.
jeff

zchizzerz Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 210 W: 59 N: 633] (7021) [2009-03-04 20:38]

hi david,
nice scenic shot. cpl works well which made the clouds stand out.

zchizzerz Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 210 W: 59 N: 633] (7021) [2009-03-04 20:32]

hi david,

good use of shallow dof which makes the subject stand out. i like the pose and color combination of the image. tfs.

jeff

zchizzerz Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 210 W: 59 N: 633] (7021) [2009-03-04 2:57]

tack sharp, good subtle colors and well-composed macro. perfect. tfs.

jeff

zchizzerz Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 210 W: 59 N: 633] (7021) [2009-03-04 2:56]

hey v,

good use of horizontal framing and composition. nice contrast and tone. tfs.

jeff

ps. it's been a while. :P

zchizzerz Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 210 W: 59 N: 633] (7021) [2009-03-04 2:45] [+]

hi jan,

i like the vibrant colors and details of the flowers. it brighten everyone's day. :)

but somehow, my eyes are kept wandering and dont know which particular subject to focus. i did a little workshop to see if it works for you. tfs!

jeff

zchizzerz Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 210 W: 59 N: 633] (7021) [2009-02-26 5:13] [+]

hi muhammad,

i like how you frame this shot and the pose is good. how far is the subject from the background? it is also a nice idea to loosen up the model to achieve what you're looking for. tfs.

jeff

zchizzerz Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 210 W: 59 N: 633] (7021) [2009-02-26 5:07]

hi ruud,
nice scenery with a balanced composition between sky (scattered clouds) and the ground (the grass). perhaps cropping the grass on the bottom right would be more effective? just a thought. tfs.

jeff