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the gaze
Informação sobre a Foto
Direitos de Autor: Marcin Brzozowski (emgieb) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 31 W: 29 N: 10] (525)
Género: Pessoas
Meio: Cor
Data da Foto: 2006-03-19
Categorias: Mood, Portrait
Câmara: Konica Minolta Dynax 5D, Tamron AF 28-200 f/3.8-5.6
Exposição: f/6.3, 1/250 segundos
More Photo Info: [view]
Versão da Foto: Versão Original, Workshop
Data de Submissão: 2006-03-25 6:17
Visto: 675
Pontos: 8
[Notas - Normas] Nota do Artista
U know what? I'm scared of making portraits... I don't know why, maybe I think it's just too difficult for me... I don't know. Anyway, this is one of my tries ;]

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RAW->TIFF->JPG, denoised (ISO 800 isn't perfect :), little play with contrast, WB, shadow and highlights, downsized, resharpened and framed.
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Well Marcin, don't judge yourself too hard and don't hesitate to do portrait... It is very good! The composition and lightning are great!
Patrick

Hi Marcin

I tried a ws for you.

Pierwsze Twoje zdjecie, do ktorego nijak nie moge sie przekonac... Poprzednia jego wersja byla lepsza IMHO. Tutaj wyglada na to, jakbys nie mogl sie zdecydowac czy twarz ma byc ciemna, czy jasna. Workshop dopiero to naprawia... Moze sprobuj konwersji do B&W? Wydaje mi sie, ze fotka wiele by na tym zyskala, tym bardziej ze wyszedl Ci paskudny, kolorowy szum, ktory tam moglby byc elementem artystycznym.

Pozdrawiam :)

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  • Karey Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 83 W: 15 N: 67] (775)
  • [2006-05-29 14:53]
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I like your people studies, you are a good people photographer. I too am working on portraits, I think it is about managing the lighting. I like your angle here, the light behind is challenging but it nicely outlines his head and neck and stubble. You need detail in the camera side of the face, there is enough to make a good shot, however I wonder if a reflector board to bounce some light back into the face would have made it a great shot? Keep at it, cheers, Karey

Hi Marcin

YOu have done well with this self portrait. Good lighting and POV though I do think the ISO setting could perhaps have been better...looks just a little grainy.

Great photo though...I like it! :-)

Martyn

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