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• ErikSven (2299)
• [2008-11-13 1:26]
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Hallo Kuba,
There are some intriguing elements in this double portrait: the pose of your two models, the dark look in their eyes, the fact that they don't seem to get in touch with each other. B&W is an appropriate choice for this mood, I think.
However, I've some problems with the coherence between your models (especially the woman on the foreground) on the one hand, and the setting on the other hand. To me, there is no real interaction between both. For example, it looks as if the model in the foreground had been pasted in the photo - she pops out too much against the blurred background.
Could it be you merged an indoor and an outdoor photo (see also the chair)? The experiment is interesting, but not credible enough, to me, because of that lack of coherence.
Of course, this is only my personal opinion. Feel free to (dis)agree ;o).
TFS & kind regards,
Erik

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• Black_Dog (1815)
• [2008-11-13 5:17]

Czolem Kuba!
Piekne i tajemnicze dziewczyny. Intrygujaca sytuacja. Swietna fotografia.
Pozdrawiam.