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Inside The Star


Inside The Star
Informação sobre a Foto
Direitos de Autor: Sandy Garfinkel (messenger1) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 526 W: 37 N: 868] (4208)
Género: Lugares
Meio: Cor
Data da Foto: 2009-07-03
Categorias: Vida Diária, Natureza, Arte, Abstract
Câmara: Canon EOS 50D, Canon 28-135mm 3.5-5.6 IS USM
Exposição: f/7.1, 1/200 segundos
More Photo Info: [view]
Versão da Foto: Versão Original
Data de Submissão: 2009-07-13 3:58
Visto: 169
Pontos: 24
[Notas - Normas] Nota do Artista
This is another view of "L'Etoile d'Ouchy," a sculpture located at the end of the pier jutting out into Lake Geneva from Lausanne's Ouchy lakefront area. I decided to go for more symmetry this time.

The sun was setting as I got up underneath the sculpture and stood just under one of the round ports that punctuate the mesh of metal, so that the sky was visible through the opposing port. I used a fairly wide angle to get a lot of the interior of the sculpture in the frame.

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Good geometric composition !

Hi Sandy,
This is what I call a geometricl composition!
A play with all kinds of shapes and lines with fabulous shadows.
Great lighting casting a nice rim illumination on the edge of the central circular shape!
Excellent presentation of this perspective with a nice worm's eye view!
Well done,

Francis Xavier

Olá Sany
Nice work
good look
regrads Paulo

Hello Sandy,
Superb lines and graphism. I am particularly drawn to this type of artwork. The positioning of the circle rightfully follows the rule of thirds. Well exposed and composed. Regards...
Danilo

Hi Sandy
original and interesting shot
impressive details of these geometrical forms
as well the combination of colors on sky blue withe grey
amazing light
Congratulations!

Oana

Hi Sandy!
Wonderful geometric compo!
beautiful and artistic view
to sky and stars,great "pov"
Regards and tfs
Kostas

Ciao Sandy, superb composition with fantastic graphic, wonderful colors and splendid light, very well done, ciao Silvio

Hello Sandy,
Great photographic vision. Eye catching graphism, light and rhytmicity
I liked it very much..
Byavo...
TFS
Selahattin E

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  • moli Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1406 W: 275 N: 1942] (11976)
  • [2009-07-16 15:39]

Well seen and well presented.
Geometric composition and perfect effective view.
Good eye you have!
Regards
Janek Kloss

boa noite sandy
I haven´t see this: fantastic lines...atrative composition.
My regards
teresat

Hey Sandy, missed this one while I was away.
Great sky color through the grid. I'm all about symmetry, so this really works for me. Were you looking straight up .. and did you have a spot to balance yourself?
Great job.
Trudy

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  • karith Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1067 W: 80 N: 1171] (7409)
  • [2009-07-23 13:46]
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This is one of my favorites among your recent posts. I really like how the geometric lines and pattern are juxtaposed in their orderly structured way against the clouds floating freely in the open sky beyond. The center circle seems to invite movement from one realm to the other, a visual relief and pleasure:) Well seen and captured!

Oops...I've been catching up and have now used up my cirles for the day. You deserve about ten of them for this one:)

i prefer the square off centred version but it's truly a great subject
jc

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