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Lattice Work


Lattice Work
Informação sobre a Foto
Direitos de Autor: Joan West (technogran) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 602 W: 210 N: 827] (5525)
Género: Lugares
Meio: Cor
Data da Foto: 2006-03-27
Categorias: Vida Diária
Câmara: Canon Digital Rebel XT 350D
Exposição: f/20.0, 1/800 segundos
More Photo Info: [view]
Versão da Foto: Versão Original
Data de Submissão: 2006-03-31 20:28
Visto: 525
Pontos: 4
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This photo basically shows the light and some shadows of the lattice work of the trellis on our back deck. I went out one nice day for some of my first pictures with the new camera outside, and I liked the angles and shapes and tones of the wood colouring in this particular shot of the steps leading up from the lawn on to the deck.

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... only to find that your portrait sitter had fled at the last second. Try again tomorrow?
There is a curious black line running down along the foreground diagonal rail. Now what on earth could that be?
That blue lamp would complement the deck colours and it should definitely be rescued from the basement. Wouldn't it sit out here well?
This shot is a bit busy for me. I'd like to have zoned in on the 'newel' post very closely and seen the splits and grain magnified much more. Visual impact guaranteed. Next time?

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  • niraj Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 183 W: 3 N: 96] (2042)
  • [2006-03-31 23:55]

Hello joan,
Steps always brings out surprises with the lines and angles. I think you did well to capture, looks good to me. Like kit says it could be better.

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  • Dingo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2743 W: 369 N: 2624] (11948)
  • [2006-04-03 17:50]

Lots of geometrical shapes in this one, Joan. That, and the soft brown hues of the woodwork are what attract me to this shot. The near-square format works fine, but I think the wide black frame doesn't really fit.
Anyway, TFS.

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