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• Hauke (190)
• [2005-06-20 14:08]
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Just a perfect mood created, Stefania. The dots of light are running in a great way to the mood give by this single sentence of yours. Colours, soft and muted create a very special atmosphere. Subtle composition....
At all a great portrait, showing the 'less' ;-)

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• mlopes (196)
• [2005-06-20 14:08]
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Hello Stef
Hopefully i will be the first (of many) to write something about this photo, and it will be something very good!

I love your body position, very sensual and inigmatic, i like the crop and framing.

I just think the light is probably too weak, i'm wondering how this photo would be with (very) slighly lighter

Great work

Regards from Portugal
Mário

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• iso (27899)
• [2005-06-20 15:00]
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A real artistic work, I just like it, not enough qualified to critic a work like that, congrats.

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• davidbat (1247)
• [2005-06-20 15:33]
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Hi Stefania!
Bela composição, muito charme e atração!
Iluminação bem controlada e belo trabalho você conseguiu aqui!
Bravo!
David

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• SRB (803)
• [2005-06-20 16:11]
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nice, sensual, but some parts are to dark in my opinion. using some whiteboards to reflect a bit of light on those parts could help.
greetz
SRB

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• aaubry (281)
• [2005-06-20 16:56]
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Hello Stefania,
Superbe atmospere you have rendered here.
The light is really perfect.
I like the posture of that woman.
splendid work.
Alex

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• Nessuno (0)
• [2005-06-20 17:09]
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Well Stef, this one is really dark on my screen! I can just distinguish the contours of your arms and head, but I cant see detail in your hands... the pose is great though!

Btw, did you clone out the vent, or did you choose a different spot for the photo...?!

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• delal (522)
• [2005-06-20 17:12]
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beautifully done!! I love portraits, as long as they are natural..I love the title also..one of my fav.s now!!

delal

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• Sutavugu (5)
• [2005-06-20 17:21]
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Hi Stef,
This is another beautiful picture.. Composition and lighting are perfect..
You express the mood great..
Congrats,
..Calayan

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• letr (6780)
• [2005-06-20 17:34]
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I can imagen to hang the last four posts on my wall Stef..nice sequal this one,like the pose here and the compo with the triangles..what I would change about it is the warmth here , adding a lighting efffect to get a more local light ....made a ws to show you

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• Werewolf (26142)
• [2005-06-20 21:03]
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Great suite of the other! The mood is great to the max, a bit of exotism, another of mystery and a lot of romantism. For the colors used in shadow and light, for the effect of anonymous give the shadow, And a lot for the mix of these two points ;)
Good night!

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• ciore (2305)
• [2005-06-21 2:30]
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beautiful.
that light work very well, Stefania..
Amazing composition and colour-work
congrats
Viktorija

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• edie (0)
• [2005-06-21 5:53]
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YOu have tryed a special key to make each part of your body by a such good point of view and lovely soft tone that make so warm and sensual all your picture.
Congrats.
All the best
Edie
I'm out of point,I'll return tomorrow.

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• paul_bk (0)
• [2005-06-21 6:06]
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Stefania I like this series......
but this is special...... so light... so simple....... great
Paolo

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• fer (8073)
• [2005-06-21 6:16]
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Olá stef,

Mais uma espectacular!!!Tu estás na crista da onda,a criatividade está a todo gaz.:)
bjs
Fernando

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• alagoa (0)
• [2005-06-21 6:34]
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Obrigado pelo abraço :)
Gostei muito do facto da imagem ser escura, acho que acentua a sensualidade da mesma e ao mesmo tempo torna tudo mais uniforme. É mais um belo trabalho nesta fantástica série Stef.
Tudo na foto foi muito bem trabalhado. Parabéns amiga ;)
Abraços pra você,

Ana

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• Martine (0)
• [2005-06-21 6:38]
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nos coeurs a corps (accords) mélés

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• calamaro (857)
• [2005-06-21 7:55]
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great! you are the best in this kind of shots, I like how you play with the lines of your body and with the light shinin on it.....brava! ciao, giuliano

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• biblio (2498)
• [2005-06-21 9:46]
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Another great image Stef. Love the golden area of light on the elbow....
Look forward to seeing more

Chris

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• swallace (2059)
• [2005-06-21 15:46]
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Very, very cool photo Stef. The subtle lighting, the framing, all wonderfully done. Great work.. Wow..

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• lancegreen (94)
• [2005-06-21 23:48]
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I struggled at first to work out the shape and form on this image, but now I see it, I like it very much. It's a good job you kept that rich colour in, otherwise it would have been harder to work out.

As you know I like dark stuff, and this is good. Perhaps if we could get a little more of a clue where your head is, it would have been easier to define.

Anyway, great mood image

Lance

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• chiaraluna (2560)
• [2005-06-22 1:24]
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wonderful, soft and graceful my dear.. pure elegance :-)

love it! ^_^

Ayda

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• jkneze2 (136)
• [2005-06-28 14:00]
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There is something about the lighting in all your pics that makes them "intimate" so this one follows the others ;)
No need to do anything else.

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• ben-u-ron (4051)
• [2005-08-05 10:36]

Wow! Que foto incrivel! Adorei! É espantosa! Os meus parabéns!

Cumprimentos,
Carla

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• salil (2106)
• [2005-11-21 14:26]
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I wish the hair did not merge with the upper arm on your right ...

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• brettf1 (4852)
• [2005-12-05 13:04]

Hello Stef,

Incredibly strong mood here. I love the soft focus, soft light and soft colors. Very emotional pose. The play of light and shadows is wonderful! Very nice!

Kevin