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Mystic (Krystal 5)


Mystic (Krystal 5)
Informação sobre a Foto
Direitos de Autor: Manuel Librodo (manny) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 525 W: 24 N: 1485] (11941)
Género: Pessoas
Meio: Cor
Data da Foto: 2004-10-20
Categorias: Friends/Family
Câmara: Nikon D70, Nikon 50 mm/f1.8
Exposição: f/2.4, 1/1500 segundos
Versão da Foto: Versão Original, Workshop
Data de Submissão: 2004-10-21 11:21
Visto: 2094
Favoritos: 1 [ver]
Pontos: 28
[Notas - Normas] Nota do Artista
It looks like Krystal is gonna stay with us for quite sometime. Why? I had another photo session with her yesterday and I am pretty satisfied with quite a lot of the pictures I took.

I told her to bring something that would accentuate her pretty face. She brought two scarves. I then asked her to play with it in whatever way she wanted. She did so with such spontaneity and class.

This picture was taken i the foyer of the art building. The natural light passes through a glass wall and I have to put up a black cloth for the background. She had to squeeze very close to the corner so that the light could fall on her face.

For PP, I used very slight diffuse glow, work on layers to blur and sharpen some parts, then blended the layer using soft light. Krystal's complexion looks very Asian (though she's half-Thai, half-British).

I am posting another version....without blend mode/soft light in the workshop. As I am planning to submit this somewhere, please give me a feedback as to which version is better.

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You have raised portraitry to a level of high classed, outstanding art! What a very beautiful face this girl has. You have captured her so well, there is nothing to add... except this: I want to see more of this!!

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  • Quark Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 1314 W: 11 N: 29] (66)
  • [2004-10-21 11:32]

With a great b(l)ackground, Manny !
I like this one more than the WS, very good colours, she poses well, nice portrait again !

I already know that Krystal is one of the most beautyfull women I´ve ever seen, but through your eyes, Manny, it gets almost unreal to me. Colors, composition, textures, everything is perfect. Congratulations. You should come to Brazil and click our amazing women some day.
Best regards.

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  • egerie Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 643 W: 135 N: 266] (1968)
  • [2004-10-21 13:25]

Très beau travail dans ce portrait de cette jolie personne. Tout à mon avis est parfait, couleurs, contrastes, lumière etc... Belle composition Manuel...
Gisèle

I think both shots are well done but I think the on posted here on TL is the better of the two, the lighting is a little brighter and catches her eyes nicely. The only thing I can pick on is the slight bloodshot in her right eye.

Well done, very nice portrait and beautiful model. But for this kind of portraits I prefer BW. On my opinion I makes it more mistic and sensual, and eliminates the problem of the colours (balance; temperature, etc), keeping just the essential, the beauty… of the light.
I’ve made a workshop, I’ve just under PP set a grey conversion without any kind of other correction because, except the colour, your picture is perfect.
What do you think about it ?

-Your Workshop
I prefer that one.

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  • lucky Gold Star Critiquer [C: 56 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2004-10-21 18:37]

Very nice portrait shot... You captured very well the expression on the face... Excellent composition, the colours are warm and nice...
Very well done!

Very Good! magnificent!

A magnificent portrait and I prefer this version. The diffuse light is very beautiful, I like very much seeing the colours which seem to sparkle in the sling, the eyes which shine, the bare shoulder. The glance of this lady is very beautiful, she seems lost in its thoughts. Haughtiness!

Un magnifique portrait et je préfère cette version-ci. La lumière diffuse est très belle, j'aime beaucoup voir les couleurs qui semblent scintiller dans l'écharpe, les yeux qui brillent, l'épaule dénudée. Le regard de cette dame est très beau, elle semble perdue dans ses pensées. Superbe!

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  • Nao Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 42 W: 20 N: 69] (1117)
  • [2004-10-21 22:09]

C'est une très belle photo, Manuel. Pour ma part, j'ai toujours eu de la difficulté a capturer l'essence des gens dans mes photos, C'est pourquoi je n'en fais pas beaucoup.Mais vous avez réussi,à mon humble avis, à capturer le mystère de cette jeune fille sur pellicule. Tout est très réussi: le portrait, le cadre, la texture et l'ambiance. Pour moi, cette photo-ci est la meilleure. Le contraste est excellent, et la lumière qui frappe l'oeil droit est très intéressant. le naturel du sujet est aussi très bien réussi. FélicitaTions! J'attend la suite...

Mon Dieu qu'elle est belle ... avoir rajouté le foulard à paillettes est une très bonne idée, qui associée au fait d'avoir inclus juste l'angle de l'épaule dans la compo, concourent à la réussite de l'image. super.

Hey Manuel!
Another great shot in the Krystal series. I like the use of the scarf and the very dark but vibrant colours.

i think that the colour version is much better. The photograph is very dark, and in a black and white version, the photograph becomes way too dark. The yellow tone really allows to attach the viewers attention. The grey not so much.

-Bart

Hello Manuel!

You've made fabulous portrait. The face of this women is beautyful but despite of that this photo has perfect light, contrast, colours & the whole picture is great!

Best Regards
Pawel

HER EYES LOOKING VERY DIFF.

NICE

YOGESH

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  • mysea Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 10 W: 0 N: 23] (395)
  • [2006-01-23 10:57]

Mon dieu qu'elle est belle ...
Je vous felicite

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