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Informação sobre a Foto
Direitos de Autor: Yasir Nisar (maxloxton) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 138 W: 2 N: 120] (2835)
Género: Pessoas
Meio: Preto & Branco
Data da Foto: 2006-12-03
Categorias: Vida Diária, Decisive Moment, Mood, Portrait
Câmara: Canon EOS 20D, 70-210 mm f/4.0
Exposição: f/4, 1/40 segundos
More Photo Info: [view]
Versão da Foto: Versão Original, Workshop
Tema(s): Beautiful girls [view contributor(s)]
Data de Submissão: 2006-12-05 11:27
Visto: 3228
Favoritos: 1 [ver]
Pontos: 23
[Notas - Normas] Nota do Artista
A portrait of a young bride displaying the bridal dress of a leading designer.

comments/critics welcome
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This is a gorgeous portrait, Yasir. What great tones. Excellent light and composition. Nice dress too, to say the least. (Much better than the typical wedding dresses you usually see.) Congratulations on this fine, fine image. -Hugh

Another Great photo Yasir!

There's a real beauty in this shot - the angle of light is lovely, the composition is good and the model's expression (and dress) are beautiful.
I do think it could have been a quicker shutter speed, 1/60 would have been sufficient - unless you have boosted the contrast in PP? - the lit part of her arm and face are a little blown out.
But - a beautiful shot, very well done.

Wonderful portrait of the young bride...a master piece.

Very nice shot. I wish we could see it in colour because bridal dress in your country are usualy so nice and colorfull.
You captured a nice expression on the bride's face. The balance between light and shadow is of great taste.


MAsallah 8:)
Very beutiful..
I used your shot in another ws too 8:) hope you like.

sir we have blown out highlights here... i am talkin about the white areas...

the sepia is a great idea, but the disbalance is ruining the photo...


Very good portrait, with a nice composition and good light

Hi Yasir,

A well composed image on a very beautiful subject. The whole image, in it's treatment of the model, is very pleasing.

Your choice of B&W is interesting, but I thought it was a good choice. However, the exposure is problematic. Because of the unnecessary high contrast, the highlites have totally burnt out the detail on her hand, shoulder, neck and some areas on her face and, I assume, is doing the same to detail on the dress, especially on the right side of the image.

That might be the effect you had in mind, in which case you have succeeded. I just feel that, given the delicate nature of the subject, your approach should have been more sensitive and a softer treatment of light would have resulted in much greater detail.

I'd love to hear from you regarding the critique and to hear what your ideas were.




wow que belleza imagen de ilusión y amor


Helo Yasir,
very Nice and classic portrait.
Wonderful tone colors,
for lighting... just a bit OE in her arm.
very well done.


Fantastic portrait....
The colors...the light is just perfect!!!!!
Best regards from Brazil,

Beautiful light. Good B&W conversion. I think light on the lower side is harsh. I convert this Beautiful image in Sepia. See workshop. ( please dont mind,)

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