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Beautiful Baby

Beautiful Baby
Informação sobre a Foto
Direitos de Autor: Amy Jordan (persimon) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 378 W: 49 N: 337] (2406)
Género: Pessoas
Meio: Cor
Data da Foto: 2005-09-27
Categorias: Friends/Family, Portrait
Câmara: Canon Digital Rebel XT 350D, Canon 18-55 EFS
Exposição: f/5.6, 1/1600 segundos
Versão da Foto: Versão Original, Workshop
Tema(s): A Beautiful Child II, Sadie, My Scores in the 50's [view contributor(s)]
Data de Submissão: 2005-09-29 9:07
Visto: 2254
Favoritos: 1 [ver]
Pontos: 58
[Notas - Normas] Nota do Artista
I took these three pictures of my daughter by the backdoor. I used my favorite lighting again - natural light. There are certain spots on a baby that are just so wonderful - chubby little feet & hands, cheeks & eyes. Well, here wanted to capture something a little different. I adjusted the contrast a tad, added a border, and put the photos on a background. I hope you like it. I am one proud Mama!!

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Hi Amy,
I like your triptych. Its composition works well, with the position of the three pictures and the position of your daughter's head too.
Colours and light are sweet.
Maybe a little more sharpness should improve your work... I'm not sure.

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  • Quark Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 1314 W: 11 N: 29] (66)
  • [2005-09-29 9:28]
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This is very nice, Amy !
The three different views, the framing, the light as you say, wonderful and some softness I notice, great shot !

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  • goc Gold Star Critiquer [C: 321 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-09-29 9:32]
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and you should be proud ! :-)


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  • LuciG Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1206 W: 151 N: 655] (8171)
  • [2005-09-29 9:56]
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Hi Amy!
Un Bel assemblage de ce petit ange! Une composition tendre et pleine de douceur, un joli jeu de lumières .. C'est extraordinaire!

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  • frank Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 198 W: 14 N: 101] (764)
  • [2005-09-29 10:06]
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Lovely idea, lovely work!
Yes, you can be proud!!
My only idea for improvement is not so much the sharpness - I feel that you wanted a soft effect... it's more that I wish the middle one were swapped with the last one... (different positions...)
Even so - very nice - well done, Amy!

so soft and tender, I love your approach, beautiful, (*_*)

very nice series of photos Amy :)
i love the lighting in the shots, good tones

I think these are the most interesting photoes of any baby I have recently seen. We have a newcomer in our extended family as well and I can hardly wait to get close to her with my camera... :)

Good job! Goes to favs.


Great! 3 good POV in one! It give great photo! Excellent montage!

Amy ...this is one of your best,

Words are not needede to see she(Cuddles) is the light of your life ! Its to soon for your daughter to realise but she is blessed with a Mother like you !

Touching scene ( and trust me .. I am not a real'' baby man '' since that is a mistique world that women understand much better)

2 Tulips .. one for you and one for'cuddles' here...
( what is daughters name ??? )


Yes Amy - it is a beautiful collage of a little angel. Three different poses and three different angles - it is in fact a story board of fairy tale.
Very well done.

You have a beautiful daughter and these pictures really refect that, nice montage of images too. TFS


good work ! well done

beautiful :) great compo and colours :)))
sweet baby
regard, ewa

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  • iso Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 982 W: 61 N: 169] (29336)
  • [2005-09-29 15:30]
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Excellent quality, excellent presentation and a beautiful baby.

And you really should be proud, this is a great patchwork! All those photos are good for themselves, but put them together like this and you have a masterpiece!
Great work, TFS!


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  • erdna Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 574 W: 62 N: 749] (5437)
  • [2005-09-29 18:42]
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This is even better thant the first one you did! The lighting, point of view and tonal values of all three pictures are almost perfect!


I am away from the site for a few days (business trip) and I come back to find this beautiful montage of yours, Amy. I like each of the pictures separately but put together it becomes a work of art. I like this version better than the workshop version (despite the fact that I understand the intent of creating a movement of her turning her head). The light in each is absolutely amazing and she is adorable. Excellent!

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  • nova Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2441 W: 250 N: 873] (8693)
  • [2005-09-29 22:06]
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Beautiful montage! Very nice close ups! Great colors ! Absolutely well done! Bravo! Michel


Your work is outstanding, this is wonderful.


Amy, this one is also great too!!! My opinion, i admire the first shot. I can see and feel her soft, silky skin and hair. Yes, you can proud of yourself for your perfect shots and having a perfect baby :)

Hi Amy,

Such a lovely image!!! IT's sweet ,candid and perfect. I love the montage and the different angles you shot.
Great colours and perfect lights...

Very well done!!!

take care, Stef :))

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  • toni Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 132 W: 0 N: 32] (793)
  • [2005-09-30 18:38]
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Hi Amy
Très joli travail, l'asemblage est joli et les prises sympa.

This is a very interesting and creative collage/montage. We get the central character well photographed, then we can move our eyes around to see how the light played on her in different poses. Very good idea.

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  • udijw Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 35 W: 3 N: 34] (295)
  • [2005-10-04 17:02]
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Hi Amy,
beutiful and emotional pictures. both me and my wife enjoyed them alot.
your baby is beutiful and your use of light is doing her right.
Thank you very much,

Very nice montage, Amy! I missed it when originally published, been traveling a lot lately... Each picture by itself is great; the three together create a wonderful impression. Great work!

Beautiful series of portraits Amy. Excellent!

Oh Amy this one is really lovely I had not noticed it before, beautiful captures all 3 and natural light softens and shows love.
kiss for baby

I love this picture, very sweet and tender! A lot of emotion. Thank's!

just wonderful and perfect..

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